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I don't know, if anyone cares about this? But I did a poll a few days ago asking if you want see a seek peek of, my up coming sonamy funfiction, Remember Me. The results we 100% yes, so here is the seek peek. This is going to be in Sonic's POV in these seek peek. Enjoy

"Ames, I really do care about you. Please don't say that I don't care about you, cuz it isn't true? You're one of my closest friends, I've in this whole world. You're like a sister to me. Please tell what you meant, when you said 'I'm never there when you need me, the most.' Cuz I've always been there when need me," my response to her answer. Ames is the nickname I gave her when we're ten years old. She always loves it when I call her that. It has always put a smile on her face. I was hoping she was smiling a little bit behind her quills.

"Quit fucking lying to me, Sonic? I know you don't give a damn: if I live or die. Also what I meant by that, is whenever I need you the most? You run away from, like today when I needed you, but all you did was hurt me. Please leave me the fuck alone now," she said in a pissed off tone, while she kept her head down with her quills in front of her face. I could tell that she trying to keep her temper in control, by bottling the emotions she was feeling.

I didn't need to look in her eyes, to tell that she doing this. I knew it was wrong to force someone to tell you what's wrong with them, but I didn't want her to bottle these emotions up ether. Because I knew that it wasn't going to end well: for her, or whoever and whatever she snaps on. I knew she need to let these emotions, by talking about it. It would make her feel reveal if she does this. Then I remembered what an old wise once told me, "The eyes tell the story."

Just remembering that quote, an idea came to me. "Amy, if you think I'm lying to you? Please look me in the eyes, and call me a liar," I asked. I was hoping when she does look me in the face, and tries to call me a liar. She see that I do care about her. Then she'll just opens up to everything that's bothering her.

"If I do this? Would you leave and stay out of my life," Amy replied with a question, while she kept her head down. With her quills still in front of her face. I knew this can ruined our friendship, but to sometime to get something we want. We need to take some rick.

"I promise you I'll leave you alone," I answered confidently. Deep down, I was hoping that she sees that I'm not lying to her. Also see that I do truly care about her. After I answered her, she finally looked up. Noticing that I'm not in front of her, she looks to her right and sees me. She then looked me straight in the eyes. Looking in her jade-green eyes not only that here were more tear and puffy. But I saw sadness, anger, and fear all balled into one.

Soon as she looked me in my eyes. She would tell me this, "Sonic, you're a..." She couldn't finish what she was going to say to me. I already knew why she couldn't finish it, because she saw that I wasn't lying to her. She saw that I was telling the truth when I say I do care. Putting her head down in shame for what she was going to say, and once again her quills block her vision. All I could hear was the sobs of the heartbroken girl. Every sob I heard, was like someone stabbing me contently with a knife in my heart. She started to shake from the pain and hurt she felt. Now I was feeling, like I was witnessing a love one, slowly dying from cancer.

"Amy, pretty please me what's wrong? It's really killing me seeing you like this," as soon has I said those words.

Well guys here is the seek peek. I'm sorry that I couldn't upload it yesterday, but I'm working on it. Tell me what you think of it so far. I hope you all enjoyed the seek peek of Remember Me. Peace out from main man, D-Man611 :P

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Kanakyu's avatar
except of a few grammer fails i think it`s awesome... actually i`m not really into reading sonamy fanfics but i like yours ^-^ and i think i`ll read your sonamy story ^^